Schooling is no longer necessary ---( Task 2)

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Schooling is no longer necessary ,since more and more information is accessible on the Internet , and students can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree.? 

Giảng giải : Đây là đề Văn nghị luận cần  có đoạn phản biện 

1. 1.    Intro ( gioi thieu van de la hoc vien co can den truong nua khong khi ma thong tin đầy dẫy  tren mang )
2. 2.    Counter-argument ( thua nhan  loi ich internet -à BUT…..)

3.    Argument 1 ( Loi ich cua nha truong )

Conclusion: Khẳng định Trường học tiếp tục là điểm đến chính của sinh viên, Internet là phụ

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Suggested outline Intro : Internet changing people’s way of living + studying but far from providing a wholesome and comprehensive education as schools do.

Body1: Counter- agrment : The Advantage of the inetrnet

1.  The master key to abundant information à good understanding of computer teachnology give sts an edge in searching and making use of the info

ðEx: Google provide multidimensional( đa chiều)  understanding of current issues of deeper insight into the events or experiments.

ðDoes not automatically mean that The internet can replace schools.

Body2: Argument : Role of schools== essential for one’s upbringing

1.Not only a platform to impart ( truyền bá)  knowledge , also a stage to educate about values and attitudes.

Encouraged by teachers and peers,sts are benefited  in a wider range.

ðHow to be themselves while fitting in a group +How to develop their critical thinking while taking advice from others.+Learn how to judge the information from the internet as right and wrong =>The internet can hardly serve these functions.

Conclusion:Schools keep playing the leading role,while  the internet will be a complementary part.

Mở Bài Mẫu ( viết bởi học viên )

Các điểm tô vàng là cụm từ hoặc mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn. Các điểm tô đỏ là từ vựng đặc biệt. Một bài viết cần nhiều điểm đỏ vàng như vậy để lấy điểm cao.

Thương Nhớ’s sample Intro:

The way people receive information nowadays has been greatly transformed by the Internet . Students from all walks of life have never seen themselves immersed and sunk in a wealth of information on the Internet . This,however,has brought up the question of the most effective academic envinroment whether schooling or online coaching.

Be Hieu Thao’s sample answer:

The world today is charactised by the free flow of online information and knowledge which has brought about benefits for education and human. Therefore,it becomes a heatedly debated topic whether a student should be required to attend classes or learn via the Internet. In this essay, I will examine both these view points and indicate mine.

Be Co Giao’s sample answer:

The internet has delivered an explosion of learning opportunies for today’s students, creating an abudance of information,and knowledge.Teachers ,traditional educators,classrooms , schools, therefore,are no longer vital to access information. This essay will elaborate on( explain in detail)  this view and express my own stance / position/ perspective./point of view/opinion/.

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