Task 1 Why people left the Uk for other countries and why people stayed in the Uk

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Task 1 : Ielts recent actual tests

Mr Gia’s sample 1:( 150 /150 words)

Compared and contrasted in these two pie charts is the data on reasons people either departed or remained in the UK measured by percentage over five categories for each.

Intersetingly ,the UK seemed to be  an appealing destination as most people came in and out for family reunion , up to 39% of people leaving the country would agree to that reason while another less dramatical 34% immigrating to this european country would say the same.

Surprisingly , a quite large amounts /numbers of peole were leaving this country for weather reasons ( 24%) ; in contrast, this country highly attracted  employement from other parts of the world (more than one -fourth of immigrants visiting the country)

Some similar figures for people fleeing and paying a visit to the country for financial reasons and taxation were recorded fluctuating around 9-10% while another 10% enjoyed the healthcare system of this country.

The Uk must have been famous for its international language as it was seeing nearly one- fifth of the contemporary inhabitants stay for language learning.

Mr Bi's Sample 2 : 193/150 words

Compared and contrasted in the two pie charts is the data on reasons people in the Uk either left of came in there under five catogeroies measured by percentage.

Interestingly the most common reason for people to leave and stay in this european country is family and friend reunion as up to 39% and 34% of these people would agree to the same reason.

However, another dramatical number of people were moving out of the country (24%)  because of its distinct weather.

Employment in the Uk must have been greatly  attractive when the labour flow in and out of this country witnessed  a bit over one -fourth ( 28%)  of the total number emigarting there for seeking jobs while  a much less 18% left the country for the same reason.The Uk is also famous for its international language- english, so this country saw a wave of  a near one-fifth (19%)  of people visting for language learning purposes.Taxation and financial reasons, however, were the least popular reason for people to leave or stay, only fluctuating around 10% , while another 10% of people moved in the country because they appreciated the provided heathcare system.