the main aim of universty education is to help graduates find better jobs,while some people claim/content /agrue that a university education has wider benefits for individuals and society as a whole.

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 Task 2 

Many people believe that the main aim of universty education is to help graduates find better jobs,while some people claim/content /agrue that a university education has wider benefits for individuals and society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 

Answer : 

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 Body 1 : Why this thinking is well – justified ( có thể thông cảm )  ( a better job should be the main goal of uni education)

-        The competitive job markets push parent to support their children finacially

ü Two facts contributing to this thinking: the sum of tuition fees  for university EDU is not small to many families.

ü The uncertanity of the job markets

BUT this does not mean higher education is all about getting a decent job.

BODY 2 Roles of Uni EDU:

ü  Develop personality of an individual and the significance of one’s life to others

o  è benefits sts not only in terms of starting a carree but what lies behind the job : morality and personal development.

§   This closely related to the development of a nation .

Conclusion : I firmly believe UNI EDU benefits Sts in a wider sphere than that of the workplace

Mở bài mẫu : 

Sample intro 1 -Mr Gia:

It is absolutely understandable that / Understandbly , the ultimate goal of nearly almost all students getting through univesity education is to be able to aquire a decent job to compenste/make up  for all the financial and physical hardships they may have to experience.I am, however, of the wider perspective claiming institutions like universities have more to offer one indvidual than a highly -desirable job.

Sample intro 2 -Mr Gia:

While an increasingly larger proportion of parents and students  hold a persuasive belief  that university education would grant them a bigger chance for a more decent job in their later working life, I personally am convinced that higher education provides students with wider benefits rather than a  promising career.

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