Some rich countries provide financial support to the poor countries..

Some rich countries provide financial support to the poor countries,but some other people claim that they should provide some other types of help to those poor countries.
To what extent you agree or disagree?

( Văn nghị luận có đoạn phản biện) 

 Sample 1 :

Intro : mở bài mẫu  

I find myself in a dilemma when the issue comes up as i am of the firm belief that money ,in most cases, mainly contributes to the success of any project or of problem solving .however,in this situation,i reckon that apart from financial support,advanced and prosporous nations may offer a hand in such other fields as education, and infrastructure.

 Counter- argument : Đoạn Phản Biện 

It is understandable as  some people content that the problem always lies at financial shortage .the fact is that most problems ranging from environment to medicine and such can be eased quickly if a proper amount of fund is exerted ( thực hiện ) adequately ( đúng đắn) . We, however, should not overlook ( xem nhẹ) the factor of human in managing and implementing(thực thi)  that fund( tiền ).again,reality (thực tế)  has shown me that financial aid ,if not managed properly and transparently( minh bạch),has failed in most cases.

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